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This is only the first level, just want some ideas and opinions. You play as a sentient block bent on making it through multiple obstacle courses filled with cute enemies.


Last Updated: May 26, 2019



May 29, 2019

Nice start! I really like the little faces, they give the blocs some character!

Some suggestions:

  • Get rid of the UI buttons at the beginning until the game actually starts.
  • Whats with the lines in the middle of the screen? What is it supposed to be? The background? It's weird how they move with the player.
  • It's very empty feeling. Even though you have stuff going on in the world, it just feels so bare. I think because of the pure white background. I get the simplistic style, but something is just off. I think you need to add some details in the background just to make it feel like there is something. Other games with similar concepts add a wrinkled paper texture in some spots (to make it look like a hand drawn world), or some lines to represent bricks. Now don't go overboard with this because it will get rid of the charm and minimalistic style. So you would have to find a balance.

May 28, 2019

Good news! I got help and fixed the canvas- will get working on your critiques

May 28, 2019

Good game man but the background is making me get confused

May 27, 2019

Good start,work on graphics more and it is a bit hard for a first level.Hope you found your canvas as I have no other solution for this matter but look for it somewhere🤪

May 26, 2019

I somehow scrolled out too far and now I can’t find my canvas. Help?

May 28, 2019

I replied to your support email, did my solution not work?

Try double tapping with 2 fingers, that will reset the screen to the original screen position.

May 26, 2019

For a first level, this is cool. :)

You got a tutorial along with all the obstacles, but one problem is that text is hard to read and stuff is hard to see. You can make the screen bigger, zoom out so players can see further. The text can have a white background or a white shadow so it can be readable.

The game is decent, I want to see the hyperPad community grow and start out with projects like this. This is a step closer to achieving a better community. ;)