Choose your story.

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Made by: Holy Ninja developer

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Do you want a game where you decide how you stay alive? Take a chance? Well this is a game to decide on certain options and has practical events. This game knows it’s purpose it can help improve your thinking at picking certain options. So I created this game not to only help, but to have fun. I do recommend playing at age 7+ or over. If your fine with lower we’ll that’s your choice enjoy. See ya!

VERSION 2.4

Last Updated: August 15, 2017

More bug fixes.. (AND NEWS, SCROLL DOWN FOR NEWS!)

- Had to fix the restart button on last chapter!

NEWS!!

- Update 3.0 will be released in 5 days.

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August 16, 2017

This game is terrible, there are way too many grammar mistakes, there is almost no content and the way he has it right now with the level based format it makes it so none of the choices you made are saved.

August 15, 2017

This can be a good project if supported with some graphics and animations.that also remind me "framed" app,check it to get some idea.

August 15, 2017

I already said that graphics and animations will be released in next update, but thank you for commenting. :)

August 15, 2017

NEWS!!

In update 3.0 I will be renaming the project. It will be called “decide your story”. It will make more sense for people when they play the game, and surely make the game more interesting.

August 14, 2017

This is a cool game!

August 15, 2017

Thank you, I’m glad you like it. :)

August 14, 2017

Thanks for fixing game crash bug. Now my opinion. First, technical problems. In many instant death choices there is no ability to return to the homepage, so I had to leave the game and play it again. So, suggestion 1 is to add homepages everywhere where it is possible. I don't understand why you have decided to make basement separately from the chapter 2. Also, if you enter a basement and you don't have a flashlight, you can't return to the homepage and you have to leave the game and play it again. So, suggestion 2: Make entering the basement chapter a continue of a chapter 2 of level 1. First when I read page when I was going to the basement, I thought it was game over. But then I, luckily, remembered that the basement was in level 1 menu. And the final technical suggestion. This game needs more atmosphere, so you defietely should add sounds and musics. You can add music by downloading it on PC and adding to your Dropbox account, then link Dropbox profile in hyperPad app. You can also add UI sounds which you can download from hyperPad asset shop. You can activate them when you click stuff. Now my suggestions about the plot. I now it is your game and you decide it's story, but I think you should make it more realistic. For example, you should add a motive, why a bunch of crazy guys with shotguns, axes, spears, pistols are always hunting us. Because it is strange, this guys escapes the prison, and suddenly goes to kill us. Why us? So, the first suggestion about the story is: more detailed story with pretty rational twists. Also, you should make a bit more predictable what do choices lead to. For example, when you need to choose 1 of 2 doors in the basement, you have no idea which one leads to instant death, and which one to the ending. You shouldn't make choices like that. So, the second suggestion is: less random instant death choices, more roots that lead to different endings (and by endings I mean final endings, not insta-deaths). This is a quest text, so we can't fully see the picture. It's like a game book. You should think a bit more about environment details, what stuff is happening, what time is it, where we are. You need to write more info about people, about different places. For example, you can write how does killer look like: 'He is a tall, strong, bearded man, and in his eyes you can see nothing else but total insanity'. So, the third suggestion about plot is: more details about people, items, events, environment. It is pretty short, but you can improve it to a big awesome quest with cool plot twists and different endings, it's in your hands. So think about the atmosphere, the plot, and the characters. I wish you to make very cool text quest, good luck :-)

August 15, 2017

Thank you for comment, I will soon be adding a lot of environment and show not tell the looks of characters and way they are. And I’ll fix the part where you have to restart. Just wait 35 minutes and you should see a update 2.3, thanks for the support!

August 11, 2017

I tried playing it 4 times and it always crashes. Why exactly?

August 14, 2017

I’m sorry, I’ll fix that. Wait a couple of hours and I’ll fix it!

August 14, 2017

It’s also because I’ve added a lot of stuff and it sometimes crashes for me!

August 14, 2017

If you need help you can send the project to me. Send it to DGames135@yahoo.com if you need help

August 14, 2017

I’ve fixed the bug. You should not have any trouble getting on by time I’ve published update 2.1!

August 14, 2017

I did actually play it. It only crashes on my old iPad which was the iPad Air

August 14, 2017

Well, it’s a problem for other people as well and now you should be able to play it on both. Enjoy :)

August 14, 2017

I found a bug in chapter 2, I will fix it. Before you reach to the part!

August 11, 2017

It just crashes.. I can't play it.

August 14, 2017

I’ll fix it. Wait a couple of hours and it will be fixed!

August 14, 2017

It is fixed. Enjoy :)

August 11, 2017

I’ve released special levels, and enjoy! It took me a while to make this so I hope you like it! Have fun.

August 09, 2017

Like the game? Well leave a comment and tell me what you guys think about the project, I had put a lot of effort mostly into the upcoming new update! The update “2.0” will include special levels, they will have better features making questions last longer!